Jin Shinetsu DONE

Subject: Jin Shinetsu DONE Sun Jun 09, 2013 11:02 am

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Name: Jin Shinetsu

Age 22

Zodiac Signs: N/A

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Birthday: 6 February

Height: 6ft

Weight: 132.277 pounds

Eye Color/Shape: Brown almost black. Normal

Hair Color/Style: Short Black hair, covered

Skin Tone/Build: Light tan, Thin

Unique Features: Has a long scar down his back and a tattoo oneach of his knuckles spelling pain

Written Description: Jin is a generally thin person and always seems to be wearing black. With all his clothes he always has something covering his face because of the tace that he was insecure and liked the anonymity of masks. A lot of the time he looks sinister.

Casual Wear: Jin wears black long pants with a navy blue belt. If it is hot he wears a black short sleeve t-shirt and when it is cold he wears a long sleeve black t-shirt. He wears a mask similar to Kakashi in his free time. He has his Village head protector on his head. In his casual wear he looks quite sinister.

Ninja Wear (when he is not doing ANBU things): When he is on missions or training he wears his ninja gear. Which is ninja-yoroi (ninja armor), including a black shirt, black pants, and a black hood that covers the head and lower part of his face, leaving just the eyes visible. He plans to to make his clothes heat and fire resistant.

ANBU Wear: As an ANBU member he wears ANBU armor and uniform and an ANBU mask. With his sword attached to his belt and throwing weapon holsters. His uniforn and armour are black for stealth reasons.
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Faceclaim?: Ninja-Hangboyart

Personality; Jin seams like a really nice guy all his friends will say that he is as well, but maybe he's a bit to nice its like he's trying to cover something up and do you know what, he is because there's two parts to this mans personality the friendly nice guy and the twisted bastered he really is. Because he would kill without a thought and torture a man without any remorse, but instead of killing people he would rather keep them alive in there own living hell. Maybe he would break all their bones or maybe he would take out their eyes, you never know because he is also really unpredictable.

But all of this insanity is covered up by his niceness because he uses it as a tool and a lot of the time its genuine especially if your friends with him, but he can use it as a tool to manipulate and ultimately destroy you piece by piece. Just because he's nice it doesn't make him particularly friendly at all he will rarely go out of his way to make friends unless he is planning to use them or he thinks they are particularly talented or maybe if he even likes that person. On the occasions he let's his twisted side slip out you better watch out because he won't be very forgiving its a bit like he's in a trance sometimes he even stops listening to people just savoring the precious moment when he gets to destroy some bodies life bit by bit ,and rarely does anything like that fast he prefers to drag it out until ,at the last moment people relies what he is doing but by then it is to late. At the Village you can expect his nice side to show out most, but in battle or even at other Villages his twisted side starts to show.

As he got older he stayed a nice guy but developed some unusual traits like he becomes very insecure when people can see his face and started wearing a mask at the age of 18. Jin is very brave especially when protecting the things he loves. When he had reached the age of 19 he had managed to supress his insane side.

Nowadays Jin is a better person and has become friendly to the people of the Village, but his personality would best fit a group like the AMBU black ops or the disbanded ROOT. He really cares for his brother Ryuji and would do anything for him. If something like Ryuji dying happens or somebody sees his face his twisted side will emerge and will only go away if he kills the person who sees his face, but if Ryuji dies he will stay that way until he has killed everything to do with Ryuji's death including the village they are from and yet if something like that happens he will never go back to normal.

Likes:

His Village
Ryuji
Pizza
His mask
His Clan
Hot Days
Darkness
Stealth
Taijutsu
Ninjutsu

Dislikes:

Genjutsu
The Uchiha Clan
Haters
Most other Villages
His Scar
People seeing his Face

Nindo: Protect the Village and the ones he loves

Catchphrase If you see my face you are already dead.

Place of Birth: Kumogakure, Kaminari no Kuni

Resident of: Kumogakure, Kaminari no Kuni

Class: Ninja

Rank: Jounin

Job: ANBU

Title: Inferno of The Cloud but prefers it if you call him by his own name.

Element(s):
Fire+Wind=Scorch Release (Waiting for approval.)
Lightning
Water.
Combat Skills(s):

*Ninjutsu=Master User 50(Dark Blue Aura)
*Taijutsu=Master User 50
*Bukijutsu=Adept User 25

Stats:

*Stamina-50+15(Ninjutsu Bonus)+15(clan)=80
*Strength-50+15(taijutsu Bonus)=65
*Agility-24+6(taijutsu Bonus)=27
*Dexterity-50+15(Ninjutsu Bonus)=65
*Constitution-35
*Wisdom-21
*Fate-0

Clan/Bloodline:Shinetsu-Scorch Release

Special Abilities:
Major
Bloodline Ability (Shinetsu-Scorch Release)
Has all levels of the Scorch release with a dark blue flame and has Scorch Release: Extremely Steaming Murder
Minor:
ANBU Rank
Flaws:
Major
KKG is weak to ice release and water release and attacks are close range.
If Jins face is exposed he will be unable to do anything not even defend himself, it takes something big to return a battle worthy state.
Minor:
Suffers from posttraumatic stress (can make him lose focus in the battle.)

Family Members:

Backstory:
Born-6: He had a normal birth in the Kumogakure hospital and was born as a healthy thin baby. At the age of 1.5 he was already learning to walk and by 2 years old he was potty trained and could walk. AT the age of 4 he found out that had developed his clans Bloodline but could not use it properly and he was already practicing basic Taijutsu with his brother Ryuji. At the age of 5 he could only do a body flicker in Ninjutsu but it was promising. At the age of 6 he joined the Academy.

Age 7-12: During his academy years he worked incredibly hard and mastering asd many jutsu as he could. He pushed his body to the limit every single day and had ended up in the hospital more than once a month. This eventually lead his body to stop functioning for two months and having to spend most of that time in hospital. His brother visited him a lot during those times. The fact that he missed a lot of time in the Academy forced him to redo that year. From his skills he far surpassed everybody on his second time round. At the age of 11 he passed training, but was put on a mission that lasted a year.

Genin Years: During the one year mission the other two members in his team died the first from an attack of a Missing Ninja while their sensei was away, he returned in time to save the other two genin. The other Genin died when she got bitten by a snake and died when they could not get her to the hospital in time. The mission they had taken was D-rank and all they had to do was travel to another land. Jin was mentally traumatised and ran away from the Village only to end up letting his rage out and killing a civilian when the road was empty. After he had mentally recovered enough he went back to his Village and found out the nobody knew who killed the civilian. He to this day has nightmares about that depressing day.

Chunin Years: For him the Chunin exams were easy and he passed with flying colours. As a Chunin he took the hardest missions he could find to test himself and completed every single one. At this age he was noted as very unwise. At this age he was in a battle with a group of missing Ninja. They were all D rank except their leader who was a C rank. THe battle was long and bloody but Jin came out alive, but in the need of serious medical help and from that day forth he always wears a mask. Soon after he was offered to become an ANBU black ops member but turned it down because he wanted to become a Jounin before he joins. Hey enjoyed life as a Chunin but never got a squad and was happy about it. When he thought he was ready he applied to become a Special Jounin.

Special Jounin: After his Special Jounin request was approved he had a party and decided to go to the Otogakure for a few days. When he got back he remarked that it was the best rice he had ever tasted and made sure to only ever eat rice from there, he simply refuses to eat rice from anywhere else. He still refused to take on a squad because, much like his brother he was doing much too dangerous missions for Genin. As a Special Jounin he did help particularly skilled Taijutsu and Ninjutsu learners improve their skills, but did not take them on as his squad you could view him more as a tutor. Around the same time Ryuji was made Raikage Jin was made a Jounin.

Jounin: Just a few weeks before Ryuji became Raikage. Hey he was 19 sure he is going to have a party but that still doesn't explain how he ended up in Konohagakure wearing only his mask and no other clothes. To get out of Konohagakure he ran on the roofs to try to get as little attention as possible. No only did most of the people notice him, but he also gave a whole new meaning to free running. That was last time he ever touched alcohol. As a Jounin he did many bad things and things that will scar him mentally. He finally made a request to get a team but was promoted to AMBU before he got a team.

ANBU Black Ops: Jin was always a different type of ANBU, He decided he can handle a squad and his ANBU duties so he requested one from his brother the Raikage and now the leader of team 2 but has no Genin members yet. He really enjoys his ANBU mask because of his extra face covering. His personality fits an ANBU member because of his ruthlessness to other village's ninja. He has done very little as an ANBU black ops member because this is the stage of his life where he is now.

RP Sample:RP Sample:

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Weapons and Equipment: ANBU armor and uniform, 25 Kunai, 25 Shuriken, a katana, and an ANBU mask.

Techniques: Scorch Release: Extremely Steaming Murder 15 Jutsu of B rank or lower.(post in first update)

Yen: 280,000

Jounin Posts : 391 Join date : 2013-04-30

Hello Jin and welcome to our site! I'm going to be the one to grade your character app!

First thing's first, please don't remove any section of the template. If you don't wish to display a Zodiac Sign, merely put N/A.

Next, the first paragraph in your written description is too short. A paragraph is 3-5 sentences.

Fire Resistant clothing needs to be bought at the shop. Once you have it, you can request to have it edited into your description.

proof read your app for typos.

You need to re-add wisdom and fate to the stats. Like I said, please don't take things out of the template. Wisdom and Fate are stats too. So please add to your wisdom, and add the fate stat but leave it blank for now. Your Fate will be issued upon your approval.

Eight gates is Konoha Exclusive. Sorry.

Also there is a second post to the template that has a section for the jutsu you can start with, as well as equipment. As an ANBU you start with your equipment being your ANBU armor and uniform, 25 Kunai, 25 Shuriken, a katana, and an ANBU mask. your weapons will be iron,as that is the base metal here.

You need to have two sections to your SA's and Weaknesses, Major and Minor. For the best example of how this is done, please refer to Uchiha Shinji.

Other than that, have fun completing your profile!

Subject: Re: Jin Shinetsu DONE Sun Jun 09, 2013 3:45 pm

Edited and almost done if you can check to see if I made any other errors that would be great and thanks for the warm welcome.

Jounin Posts : 391 Join date : 2013-04-30

Ok Jin, and yw!

1.) You can't have a wisdom of 0 unless you want to be stupid.

2.) How does being twisted affect him as a weakness. Can you explain that in there please?

3.) Can you provide an RP sample?

Subject: Re: Jin Shinetsu DONE Mon Jun 10, 2013 7:56 am

I am not done yet because I am still working on my history and the other two thing i will change soon.

Jounin Posts : 391 Join date : 2013-04-30

mmk.

Subject: Re: Jin Shinetsu DONE Mon Jun 10, 2013 3:22 pm

edited everything up to my RP sample. If you can look and see if I made any mistakes on everything up until my RP sample that would be great. My equipment will be added when RP sample is done.

Jounin Posts : 391 Join date : 2013-04-30

Ok, everything in there is ok except your new weakness. Claustrophobia is when you're afraid of small spaces. How does your opponent going underground make you claustrophobic?

Subject: Re: Jin Shinetsu DONE Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:20 pm

I have finished everything. cheers

Subject: Re: Jin Shinetsu DONE Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:43 pm

Question: Are you saying you start with all the levels of your bloodline unlocked already?

Otokage Posts : 57 Join date : 2013-04-30

One other thing that I think was overlooked - starting with a stat over 50 is a no-go, those stats are worth much more than any of the others.

Subject: Re: Jin Shinetsu DONE Wed Jun 12, 2013 6:48 am

Edited everything and yes as a Major I choose level 3 three of my bloodline.

Jounin Posts : 391 Join date : 2013-04-30

Approved.

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