Kuroi Sora

Subject: Kuroi Sora Fri Jun 14, 2013 1:16 am

Name: Kuroi Sora

Age 15

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Birthday: 13/11

Zodiac Signs: Scorpio

Height: 6Ft 1inc

Weight: 82kg

Eye Color/Shape: normal, quite round with cold black pupils

Hair Color/Style: extremely long at the back, going all the way down to the small of his back, a lot like gajeels from fairy tail,pure black.

Skin Tone/Build: he is a fair skinned Caucasian. and an average build, not to fat or skinny with decent muscle tone.

Unique Features: very cold,dead eyes, and scars up and down his body.

Written Description: Kuroi is a tall, averagely built young man,who carries himself with a pride he has no recollection of ever having,and although he is not huge, he does have an intimidating aura about him that can often repel people from wanting to talk or engage in any social activity with him at all.He often got attention because of his hair, and mostly his eyes,his hair was often jeered at, mainly because it was not neat and tidy like everyone else, but also because of its length.

If not for his body posture or his unmistakable aura, he could very well pass for a woman.His eyes were the main focus of attention, he would often close his eyes just enough that he could see but not open enough for people to see his pupils, which often scared people, normally children, who would call him the boggy man for his dark appearance and dead eyes.
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Personality; Kurois personality is quite dark, he hates most people he comes across, and he doesnt plan on trying to change it, even as a child, he had a great childhood, his parents were good to him, he had plenty of opportunities presented to him, but he refused to take them, and instead, threw them back in peoples faces.

he does not exactly relish the company of others, although there is one person, wh, no matter how hard he tried, he could not hate, Yui,but aside from this, he generally found people annoying and pointless, especially the ones who took things to seriously and tried to hard, but by no means was he laid back, he didnt act stupid, he just got on with things while being half assed, although sometimes he did try, but he didnt exactly mind being hypocritical once in a while.

he grew up having no freinds, ot that people didnt try to be his friend, he just didnt care for people even at a young age, he also should promise in genjutsu and taijutsu, but lacking any real prowess in ninjutsu. but this didnt bother him as he felt no need for it, as the thought of being able to fuck with people minds was such a delightful thought for him.

Likes/Dislikes: Likes,quiet,the dark,the moon,isolation or small spaces. Dislikes,day time, most people,moraly obliged people.

Nindo: to show what this world really is.

Catch Phrase: We live only to die, and face eternal dark,so, to those whom have experienced the vague looming darkness, they will know true fear.

Place of Birth: unknown

Resident of: kirigakure

Class:Shinobi

Rank:Genin

Job:

Title:The looming dark.

Element(s): N/A

Combat Skills(s):
Genjutsu:25Skp
Taijutsu:5Skp

Stats:
Strength:20
Agility:20
Constitution:20
Stamina:20
Dexterity:20
Wisdom:20
Fate:1

Clan/Bloodline:N/A

Special Abilities:N/A

Flaws: He has issues talking to people, which can usually end in fights, he has almost no morals, good and evil is the same thing, there is no difference for him, so this can easily get him in trouble.

Family Members: none, but lives with his friend, Yui

Backstory: growing up, kuroi often felt out of place in kiri, maybe it was because he wasnt able to perform many ninjutsu, and instead used genjutsu, bit he really didnt like this place.
He grew up on the outskirts of kiri,he lived with his mother and father in a small house, they pretty much all slept in the same room.

As kuroi started to mature, he came to understand things a little better, and came to form his own opinions of things, this in turn, led to him becoming filled with hatred for most people, except for yui, his only firend from child hood who didnt abandom him.

Growing up, kuroi never had to face many hardships, the worst of them should of been his parents death, but instead, to him, dropping food on the floor was more upsetting than this.
Kuroi now lives with yui, in a noticeably bigger house, with few neighbors, it was just what he wanted, and to this day he still lives there.

Lately, Kuroi has been feeling even more out of place, and intends to leave the village soon, wheater its alone or with yui, he still feels like he has to leave, and find what he feels is missing from his life.

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Subject: Re: Kuroi Sora Fri Jun 14, 2013 8:15 am

Hey!
This is a good app you have here, kinda feel sorry for him.
Ok, first there are one or two problems I see here, you have entered 0 as your taijutsu, and removed all the other styles that have no skp in them, so I'm assuming you want taijutsu, because you also stated he is good at it. Please edit in the amount you want for it Smile

Secondly, we, as staff, decide your fate amount. You get 1 as a genin, please edit your new fate amount
Now, for that clan. It is nice, but you have to register it first, this looks like a good clan, and I shall look at it asap once you have registered it Smile

Just mail me and I shall check your clan and character once you're done Razz

Subject: Re: Kuroi Sora Fri Jun 14, 2013 10:53 am

Also. Please provide a written description of your character.

Jounin Posts : 391 Join date : 2013-04-30

please use spaces between your paragraphs and refer back to the character template descriptions on how many paragraphs you need for description, personality, and history plz.

Subject: Re: Kuroi Sora Fri Jun 14, 2013 2:41 pm

Before I can approve this you will need to split you Written Description into paragraphs (2 are needed) and please go over it with a spell checker, it could also help to prof read it. Once that is done you need to add the second post.

Subject: Re: Kuroi Sora Fri Jun 14, 2013 2:52 pm

Weapons and Equipment: None

Techniques: all e rank

Yen: none

Jounin Posts : 391 Join date : 2013-04-30

the backstory is a bunch of run-on sentences. Please make actual sentences. A paragraph is between 3-5 paragraohs long or MORE. after you fix this, I will approve you and assign you fate.

Subject: Re: Kuroi Sora Fri Jun 14, 2013 3:09 pm

Approved with 1 fate.

» Sora clan (DONE)